【读后续写】优秀写作应具备的7种特征+5类主题升华佳句
《考试说明》中评分原则部分规定，读后续写阅卷时按5个档次给分。参考最高档次第五档（21-25分）的描述并考虑写作部分评分的其它因素，一篇优秀的读后续写具备以下特征：
优秀的读后续写具备的特征
1. 内容丰富充实，与所给短文融洽连贯；
2. 连接成分应用得当，行文结构紧凑一体，与所提供各段落开头语的衔接紧密合理；
3. 使用并用下划线标示5个以上短文中标出的关键词语；
4. 词汇丰富高级，语法准确多变（主被动句式、各类从句、特殊句式、非谓语动词等的使用情况灵活恰当、不拘一格、游刃有余）；
5. 词数充分，150词左右。评分细则规定少于130词的，从总分中减去2分；
6. 拼写准确，英式或美式拼法皆可；
7. 标点合理，使用得当。
读后续写基本是以记叙文为主，而记叙文是以记人叙事为主要内容，以叙述为主要表达方式来反映丰富多彩的现实生活的一种文体。一般来说，完成一篇完整的记叙文写作，需要选取合适的角度、按照一定的顺序组织素材进行叙述。
其中包括六个基本要素：
时间、地点、人物，事情的起因、经过和结果，即我们通常所说的五个“W”（what, who, when, where, why）和一个“H”（how）。
除此之外，鲜明的主题和生动的语言，也是一篇优秀的记叙文所不可或缺的。
描写作为记叙文的一种辅助的表达方式对加强文章的表现力发挥着重要的作用，它要求我们善于捕捉细节、刻画细节，有时还可以用上比喻、拟人、夸张等修辞手法。一篇好的作文往往因为一两处细节描写而出彩。同样地，议论、抒情的表达方式对记叙文主题的展现也发挥着重要的作用。
新高考读后续写
主题升华语句
01
助人与善举主题升华
1.Sometimes, a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
3.One simple act of kindness is a blessing for both the giver and the receiver.
4.Never underestimate the power of your action. With one small gesture, you may not only spread love, but also positively influence others’ lives.
5.After all, everyone has bad days and good days. Some days you need a helping hand and some days you can be the one giving the helping hand.
6.Your random act of kindness makes a difference to others.
7.No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.
8.No good deed ever goes unrewarded.
9.No good deed ever goes wasted. Therefore, share your love from your heart today and fill your life with acts of kindness.
10.It dawned on me that a moment of kindness could mean so much to another, and that a simple act could make the world so much better.
11.May your life be full of giving, caring, and helping that bring joy to you while you bring joy to others.
12.Never had I anticipated that a random act of kindness would inject such great power into others and change their life.
02
逆境、改变、希望主题升华
1.If we were allowed to go through our life without any toughness, it would cripple us.
2.Hardships often prepare ordinary people for an extraordinary destiny.
3.We don’t know who we are until we’ve faced real adversity.
4.Adversity is inevitable, but difficulties or misfortunes don't have to keep us from achieving our intended goals.
5.Success is to be measured not so much by the position that one has reached in life as by the obstacles which he has overcome.
6.Turn our wounds into wisdom.
7.Fear never builds the future, but hope does.
8.A man can see farther through a tear than a telescope. Misfortune forces us to focus on our strengths and develop them more fully. And that makes us better people.
9.Everyone is handed adversity in life. No one’s journey is easy. It’s how they handle it that makes people unique.
10.The greatest discovery of all time is that a person can change his future by merely changing his attitude.
11.I can't change the direction of the wind, but I can adjust my sails to always reach my destination.
12.Times and conditions change so rapidly that we must keep our aim constantly focused on the future.
03
积极的态度主题升华
1.Life is 10% what happens to us and 90% how we react to it.
生活中10%是发生在我们身上的事，90%是我们应对的方式。
2.The positive thinker sees the invisible, feels the intangible, and achieves the impossible.
积极的思考者能看到看不见的，感受无形的，实现不可能的。
3.It’s not what happens to you, but how you react to it that matters.
在你身上发生了什么并不重要，重要的是你如何应对。
4.Live life to the fullest, and focus on the positive.
充分地享受人生，保持积极的心态。
5.One small positive thought can change your whole day.
一个积极的小想法可以改变你的一整天。
6.When life gives you lemons, make lemonade.
当生活给了你柠檬，就做柠檬水。
7.Instead of worrying about what you cannot control, shift your energy to what you can create.
不要担心你不能控制的事情，把你的精力转移到你能创造的事情上。
8.You cannot control the behavior of others, but you can always choose how you respond to it.
你无法控制他人的行为，但你可以选择如何应对。
9.The more you feed your mind with positive thoughts, the more you can attract great things into your life.
你越是用积极的思想充实你的头脑，你就越能吸引极好的事物进入你的生活。
10.Happiness depends on your mindset and attitude.
幸福取决于你的心态和态度。
11.Your attitude will make a difference on how you view the facts in your life.
你的态度会改变你看待生活中的事实的方式。
04
梦想主题升华
1.It’s true: If the dream is big enough, the facts don’t count.
心中有目标，风雨不折腰。这句话没错。
2.“All of the hard work and sacrifice paid off,” she said. “When you have a dream, believe it with all of your heart.”
“所有的努力和牺牲都得到了回报，”她说。“当你有梦想时，要全心全意地相信它。”
3.Anyone with a dream, courage and persistence will be successful.”
任何一个有梦想，有勇气和毅力的人都会成功。”
4.I know now that big ambitions need not just time to develop, but firm belief in them. And I will not allow anyone else to decide for me what's possible.
我现在知道，远大的抱负不仅需要时间来发展，还需要坚定的信念。我不会让别人替我决定什么是可能的。
5.The key is to focus on your dreams,instead of the hardships you encounter along the way.
关键是要专注于你的梦想，而不是你一路上遇到的困难。
6.Fulfilling one's dream has nothing to do with age,disability or the thoughts or expectations of others,but a firm belief in yourself.
实现一个人的梦想与年龄、残疾或他人的想法或期望无关，而是与对自己的坚定的信念有关。
7.When I held fast to my dream, even during the tough times, the miracles really began to happen.
当我坚持我的梦想，即使在艰难的时候，奇迹真的开始发生了。
8.The world always makes way for the dreamer.
这个世界总是会给梦想家让路。
9.My dream has powered so much energy in me that my life has become colorful every day. So, however hard it will be to stick to my dream, no way will I give it up!
我的梦想为我提供了如此多的能量，我的生活每天都变得丰富多彩。所以，无论坚持我的梦想是多么艰难，我都不会放弃!
10.That dream helped me put everything behind me and gave me the confidence to pursue new possibilities.
那个梦想帮助我放下一切，给了我追求新的可能性的信心。
11.She taught us by example that it’s never too late to be all you can possibly be.
她以身作则告诉我们，成为你可能成为的（人）永远都不晚。
【佳句赏读——梦想】
1.Never allow reality to get in the way of your dreams.
永远不要让现实阻挡你的梦想。
2.A dream doesn’t become reality through magic; it takes sweat, determination and hard work.
梦想不会通过魔法变成现实;它需要汗水、决心和努力工作。
3.There is only one thing that makes a dream impossible to achieve: the fear of failure.
世界上只有一样东西可以阻止梦想实现，那就是害怕失败。
4.Life without dreams is like a bird with a broken wing – it can’t fly.
没有梦想的生活就像一只断了翅膀的鸟，它不能飞翔。
5.You are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream.
设定一个新的目标或去梦想一个新的梦想永远都不迟。
6.The biggest adventure you can take is to live the life of your dreams.
你能经历的最大冒险，就是过你梦想的生活。
7.Don’t let others hijack your dreams. Be captain of your own ship and master of your own destiny.
不要让别人劫持你的梦想。做自己船的船长和自己命运的主人。
8.All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them.
如果我们有勇气去追求，我们所有的梦想都可以成真。
9.A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step.
千里之行，始于足下。
10.Where there is dream, there is hope.
哪里有梦想，哪里就有希望。
11.It's not enough just to dream of your ideas. You've got to take action to bring about their creation.
仅仅梦想你的想法是不够的。你必须采取行动来创造他们。
05
亲情主题升华
1.Love and care for the one you love every single day of your life. You may think what you did is just a small deed, but it may mean a lot. Some relations are made to last longer but they still need to be nurtured with love and care.
2.Sometimes we feel that we can progress quickly and reach to the newer heights in our life if we were not tied up with our family, our home. However, we fail to realize that our family, our loved ones help us survive the tough time in our lives with their support and encourage us to reach higher heights in our life. They are not holding us, but are supporting us. Never let go of our loved ones.
3.Parents will always be there and give everything they could just to make you happy. We take them for granted, and we don’t appreciate all they do for us until it’s too late. When you find a path of success in your life, carry on but don’t leave your parents behind as they are the true reason of your success.
4.Each person is different which may be due to their own circumstances. This can often lead to many differences. However, we must try to understand each other and adjust a little to make a healthy relationship with each other. And, when such differences arise between persons, it is the duty of their loved ones to keep them calm and guide towards the right path.
5.There is no shame in accepting your mistake or forgiving each other. We should be kind and humble. We should try to stay together as a family and not break away from it over the petty arguments.
6.Spend much time as you can loving and caring people who love you. Enjoy each moment with them before it’s too late. There is nothing important than family.
【亲情好句共读】
1.Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life.
2.When trouble comes, it’s your family that supports you.
3.In this world everything comes to an end except mother's love.
4.We spend precious hours fearing the inevitable. It would be wise to use that time adoring our families, cherishing our friends and living our lives.
5.The special bond between mother and her children is like a knotted long rope that can never ever be untangled forever.
6.Family is a unique gift that needs to be appreciated and treasured.
7.Our family is like the branches of a tree. We may grow in different directions, yet our roots remain as one.
8.Families are stuck together by love, so spread it around like glue.
9.It was at that moment that I had a full understanding of the significance of family.
10.Only then did it dawn on me that we should never take love for granted.
11.Not until then did I become aware of the significance of family.
12.Not until then did I realize how much my mom loved me.
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