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教学笔记〡高考书面表达:感谢信常用套句翻译及真题案例

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感谢信常用套句翻译及真题案例

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考点综述

感谢信是历年高考书面表达的热门话题,用于致谢他人的馈赠、款待、帮助、以及对慰问和祝贺信的回复。信件不适宜过长,只需写明感谢他人的理由,信文要感情真挚,措辞得体。人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一般现在时。

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应用文写作之如何写好感谢信

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感谢信一般分为三个部分:

第一段:表达感谢之情并说明原因;

第二段:细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助;

第三段:再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。

感谢信的写作指导

1.有序组织要点

      首先,应当友善地对对方的生活表示关心;其次,应明确陈述写信的目的,即致谢;然后,应肯定对方的帮助恰当好处;最后,应对对方给予的帮助再次表示感谢并表示良好的祝愿。

2.灵活把握时态

      感谢信的正文中的时态灵活多变。通常,在提到对方曾经所给予的帮助时,应用过去时态;在提到对方的帮助所产生的实际效果时,可以使用现在完成时态;在涉及到现状时,应用一般现在时;在表达祝愿或希望时,使用一般将来时态。

3.运用规范的语言

      感谢信有其自身的特色语言,在行文的每一个环节也有一些常用句型。另外表示从对方的帮助中获益时,可以从多种句型表达,要让句式灵活多样,这样更能增强表达效果。

4.表达感激之情

      感谢信的主要目的在于向对方致谢,因此语言要诚挚,友善;在信的开头和结尾部分一般会使用Thank you very much for your kindness and deep concernThanks again and wish you all the best之类的语言表达感激之情。

常用句式

第一段:表达感谢之情并说明原因:

常用句式

I am writing this letter to thank you for

I am writing to express my sincere thanks for...

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt (adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for

With deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express

I am writing this letter because I am indebted to you for

I am obliged(adj.感激的) to you for/I owe you a great deal for ...

I haven't seen you for a long time since we parted last time and I miss you very much. Thank you very much for...

第二段:细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助:

常用句式

It was nice/kind/thoughtful (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to..

Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit

It was your kind he lp that (强调句型)

If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assis tance), I wouldnt have (won the prize)(虚拟语气)

=But for/Without your help, I wouldn't have done

第三段:再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望:

常用句式

Thanks again for your generous help.

I appreciate it more than I can say.

My true gratitude is beyond the words description.

I feel deeply indebt ed to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help.

Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.

Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me.

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例题解读

假如你是李华,在过去一 周你在英国参加中学生文化交流活动,其间,一直住在你的英国好友Peter家,现在已经回国,请你根据以下要点给他写一封感谢信。要点包括:

1.表达感激之情;

2.回忆各种收获;

3.发出邀请。

注意:词数100左右。

【写作指导】

 第一段:开门见山,说明写信目的——表达谢意。

第二段:简述收获,表达谢意。准确明了地写出对方对自己的帮助或付出并表示感谢。

第三段:发出邀请。合乎礼节,情真意切。重申对对方的感激之情并希望给予回报。

【范文赏析】

Dear Peter,

      I am writing to convey my gratitude for your kind help and care during my stay in your country, without which I wouldnt have enjoyed it so  much.

      Guided by you, I had a chance to visit some places of interest in England and experience such unique culture as well as beau tiful scenery. Thanks to your generous help, I do believe that I have a better understanding of your country and culture. Whats more, during the week, the comfortable room, delicious meals and especially your friendly family made me feel at home.

      I will be more than pleased if I have the opportunity to repay your kindness. I will show you around in China. I am looking forward to your coming.

                                           Yours,

                                            Li Hua

写作素材

1.我写这封信是为了表达我对……的谢意/因……表达我对你的感激。

Im writing to expres s my thanks for.../convey my gratitude to you for...

2.在信中我要为……向你表达我诚挚的谢意。

I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt thanks to you for...

3.如果我有机会通过……报答你的好意,我会非常高兴。

I will be more than pleased if I have the oppor tunity to repay your kindness by...

【亮点点击】

 ▶正文尾段使用了感谢信的常用高级表达,其中动词repay的运用起到了画龙点睛的作用。

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典型例题

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假设你是李华,交换生Tracy刚刚结束在你们学校的学习生活,已经返回英国。作为班长,请你根据以下内容用英语写一分感谢信,感谢她一学期以来带给大家的美好回忆:

1. 怀念与她相处的快乐时光;

2. 感谢她对大家英语学习的帮助;

3. 感谢她为班级捐赠的英文书籍;

4. 欢迎她有机会再来中国。

【参考范文1

Dear Tracy,

      I am writing to extend my heart-felt thanks for all the beautiful memory that you have brought to us during last term on behalf of our class. The most important reasons for our gratitude are as follows. For one thing, thank you for spending so much time and effort in helping us to learn English. For another, we would like to thank you for all the English books that you have donated to our class.

      We really enjoyed the great time that we spent together, and we must thank you again for your generous assistance. If you come back to China again, please let us know. We shall appreciate it very much if you can give us a chance to return your kindness.

      Again, I would like to express our warm thanks to you!

Yours sincerely,    

Li Hua

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假如你是李华,你在洛杉机(Los Angles) 旅游期间,朋友Cathy带你游玩了美国迪斯尼乐园,回来后你想对她表达自己的感谢之情。请根据以下要点给Cathy写一封信。

  1.感谢Cathy的热情款待

  2.迪斯尼乐园的各种娱乐项目令人印象深刻

  3.邀请Cathy暑期来福州旅游。

要求:

  1.词数100左右:

  2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

  3.信件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

Dear Cathy.

  How is everything going? The reason why I wrote this letter is that

【参考范文2

Dear Cathy,

How is everything going? The reason why I wrote this letter is that I want to express my great gratitude to you. During my travel in Los Angles, you showed me around Disneyland and I had a great time there. Thanks for your considerate and enthusiastic treatment. What impressed me most are so many kinds of entertainment in Disneyland. I really enjoyed the pleasant time we spent together and I would be happy if you can give me a chance to return your kindness.

      This summer, would you like to come to my city Fuzhou for a holiday? I will take you to many places of interest and enjoy various foods. I am sure you will have fun here. Look forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua,

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假定你是李华,正在美国交流学习。你的美国老师 Amy 邀请你下周五下午 3 点到她的班里为美国小学生上一节课, 介绍中国传统艺术国画。请给她回复一封电子邮件,要点如下:

1.接受邀请,表示感谢;

2.国画简介;

3.课前学生需做的准备。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

【参考范文3

Dear Amy,

I feel honored to be invited to your class to introduce Chinese painting. It is appreciated that you would like to offer me this precious chance to share our traditional culture with your primary students.

Chinese traditional painting refers to paintings painted on Xuan paper or silk in ink by brush made of animal hair. Known as guo hua, it is an enduring art form with a 2000-year-long history. For Chinese, painting serves the purpose of conveying thoughts and showing the beauty of the lines. It is not only a practical technique for writing Chinese characters, but also a unique art which can help purify our souls.

Before the class, students are expected to prepare a special brush. Besides, special paper is also needed. Hope well have fun together.

Yours,

Li Hua

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2019年浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,

内容包括:

1. 表示感谢;

2. 回顾Alex对你的帮助;

3. 临别祝愿。

注意:

1. 词数80左右;

2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【品读范文】

Dear Alex,

Learning that youre leaving for the United States soon, Im eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.

Honestly speaking, its so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. Its indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.

Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.

Yours,

Li Hua

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要点总结

【感谢信结构以及实例说明】

第一段:表达感谢之情并说明原因;(点明主题)

第二段:细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助;(说明感谢的原因)

第三段:再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。(再次致谢)

Dear Alex,

(点明主题)Learning that youre leaving for the United States soon, Im eagerly writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your help.

(说明感谢的原因)Honestly speaking, its so nice of you to offer me a class of practical learning skills. Under your professional guidance, I have made such unbelievable progress in English. Its indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even rank first in a recent English speech contest. Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my enthusiasm for English and promotes me to regain tremendous confidence. No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.

(再次致谢)Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home.

Yours,

Li Hua

【感谢信常用句型结构】

1.thank sb. for sth. /doing sth.   因某事而感激某人

2. be grateful to sb. for sth.   因某事而感激某人

3. show/express/extend/convey my sincere thanks/gratitude to sb. for sth.         向某人表达我诚挚的谢意

4.in trouble   陷入困境

5. make greatgood progress  取得很大的进步

6.in/during/over the past/last four years  过去四年

7. be admitted to/into a university     被一所大学录取

8.say thanks to you for helping me   谢谢你帮助我

9. How time flies!   时间过得真快!

10As time goes on/goes by/with time going on/going by  随着时间的推移

11. thanks to/owing to/because of your help  多亏了你的帮助

12.enjoy myself 玩得高兴

13.pay a visit to.     去参观,拜访

14. have a better understanding of…   对……有更好的理解

15.a place of interest    名胜

【感谢信常用句型结构】

1. My true gratitude is beyond any words/description. 任何语言都无法表达我真挚的谢意。

2. We all thank you and are very grateful for what you did for us. 我们非常感激你为我们做的一切。

3. I am writing to express my thanks for your helping me improve my spoken English. 我写这封信是为了表达你帮我提高英语口语的谢意。

4. Thank you again for your wonderful hospitality and I am looking forward to seeing you soon. 再次感谢你的盛情招待,我非常期待不久会看到你。

5. Id like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 我谨借此机会感谢你给我及时的帮助和支持。

6. Thank you so much for your generous help.非常感谢您慷慨的帮助。

7.I am sincerely grateful to you for your timely help.我真诚地感谢你及时的帮助。

8.I am so grateful to you for what you have done for me.我很感谢你为我所做的一切。

9. I would like to convey my thanks to you for your kind help.我想感谢你的帮助。

10. For this reason, I am writing this letter to express my sincere thanks to you.为此,我写这封信是为了表达我对你真诚的感谢。

11.Thanks to your help, I have made rapid progress in ....多亏了你的帮助,在...我取得了了飞速的进步。

12. Without/But for your help(lf it were not for your help) ,I would not have made so much progress in my English. 要是没有你的帮助,我的英语不会取得如此大的进步。

13.1 extend you again a thousand thanks for the great favor.我太感谢你的帮助了。

14. 1 would appreciate it if you could accept my sincere thanks.如你能接受我诚挚的感谢,我不胜感激。

15. Your kindness and help will always be remembered.我将永远铭记你的善意和帮助。

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模拟强化

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假定你是李华,你所在的山西国际学校要征集一封英文感谢信,以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员,请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。

1. 表达谢意;

2. 个人感受;

3. 表达信心。

注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

参考词汇:

流行病epidemic

疫情 epidemic situation

新型冠状病毒 novel corona virus

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假定你是李华,你被自己心仪的大学录取了。请你给你的外教Mrs. Wilson写封感谢信,感谢在校期间她对你的教导和帮助,内容包括:

1.对老师的辛勤教学工作表示感谢;

2.感谢在校期间老师对自己的教导;

3.表达对老师的想念以及衷心祝愿。

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范文

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Dear Medical workers,

I am Li Hua, a high middle school student in Shanxi. I'm writing to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in this battle against the Novel Corona Virus.

In this epidemic, it is you who, despite the lack of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but striving for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all the admiration and love!

I can never express our thankfulness too much for your selfless contribution. It's widely believed that our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.

Good luck and stay well!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

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Dear Mrs. Wilson,

Im glad to write to share with you my happiness of being admitted to college, which I have been dreaming of. Firstly, Id like to express my gratitude for your excellent teaching and your care as well as love for me! Thank you for your encouraging words, which never fail to brighten my way ahead. Its you who cheered me up. Never will I forget what you said-- doors open to the very man with full confidence and instant action. Without your help, I could never have enjoyed such a joyful harvest. And I really appreciate your instruction.

I wish more and more of your students could go to their ideal colleges. Are you still too busy? How I miss you, my beloved teacher!

Yours,

Li Hua

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