书面表达：怎样写好邀请信
邀请信
高考全国卷的作文，很喜欢出书信类的作文。书信类作文看似简单，但是想要拿高分还是很难的。
书信类作文包括：邀请信、道歉信、建议信、介绍信/推荐信、申请信、感谢信和投诉信。这都是高考作文很可能遇到的类型，而且外国人很喜欢用以邮件写信，所以考查这样的作文类型也不奇怪。
今天就书信类别的1个类型 —— 邀请信万能模板。
高考英语应用文写作之邀请信
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邀请信作文结构
① 一定要分段
同样字数，同样篇幅和同样的内容的英语作文。分段写和不分段写至少相差3-6分。没有分段的作文，阅卷老师会觉得你没有逻辑，印象分就开始扣了。
② 要点齐全
对于邀请信，不可以出现缺少人物、地点、时间等等重要信息。
③ 词汇多样
对于高中生来说，如果再用初中学过的单词，作文还是不会得到高分的，这就是背单词的重要性。
④ 句式丰富
句式指的是定语从句、状语从句等等复杂句式的使用，如果全篇作文只有主谓宾的简单句式也是得不到高分。
⑤ 逻辑性
分段是体现逻辑性的其中一点，还有就是作文内容有没有把前因后果说清楚。每种类型的作文都会要求有逻辑性在。
邀请信写作逻辑
第一段. 时间点、地点（1-2句话）
第二段. 2-3个理由（4-6句）
第三段. 再次邀请（2-3句）
大概150字左右，这就是高考对于高分作文的要求的字数。字数太多阅卷老师看不完不会有高分的，字数太少也会被扣分。
邀请信常用句式
常用句式，需要背下来，当你遇到邀请信类型的作文，脑海中自然而然地浮现出来这样的句式，这样很容易拿高分。
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邀请信开头常用句式
① 我们将于……举行……，如果你能加入我们就太好了。
句式：We will hold a party on Monday,in the park if you can come,we will be happy and grateful.
解析：简单的复合句子，第一句话就表明了时间和地点，最后要加入“happy and grateful”作为礼貌用语。
② 我们将为…...举办惊喜派对。我们想邀请/我们非常荣幸地邀请你......
It's our honor to invite you to participate in a surprising party which will be held on Monday,March 26, 2018 in our dinning hall that is not very far from your home.
解析：这个句子用了两个定语从句，符合高分作文中的句式丰富，用1个长句子表达了所有内容。‘participate in’ 比较高级的表示“参加”的词汇，所以一开头用这样的句式就会让阅卷老师耳目一新。
③ 我写信邀请你…./我写信告诉你有一个…
句式：I am writing to invite you to take part in an activity which will be held on Monday.
解析：在文章的开头最好能用上一个定语从句或者复杂句式，这样阅卷老师会很加分。“ take part in” 跟“participate” 意思是一样的也是参加的意思，但是“participate”表达更加高级一点。
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主体部分常用语
① 活动细节如下
句式：The details of the activity are as follows.
解析：这样的句子通常作为第二段开头，在第一段没有表达出时间和地点，可以在第二段阐述。
② 我想在那里见到你
句式：Would you please tell me your decision as soon as possible because I want to see you there
解析：作为第二段阐述完理由的时候，结尾补上这样一句话，会显得比较有礼貌并且高级。
③ 我相信你们在......将会玩得开心
句式：I believe (that all of you will enjoy yourself in the party) will have a wonderful time.
解析：这是一个复合句式，写在第二段结尾处会加分。
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结尾常用语
① 如果你能来，我将会倍感荣幸。/如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们将不胜感激。/感激你的尽早回复。
句式： I will have great honor if you can come.
if you can make up your mind to join the party, we will be grateful
解析：' make up your mind ' 更加偏向高中词汇用法。结尾通常只是短短一句话带过，但是却也是阅卷老师很重视评分点，如果结尾能够做到点睛点题，那么作文还可以更高分。
② 如果你能来......请写信告诉我，好吗？
句式：Would you please tell me if you have made up your mind to come?
解析：用“Would you”表达有恳请，比较礼貌。很多同学喜欢用祈使句，“please tell me......”其实这样在英语用法上是不太礼貌的表达。
邀请信变化的是第二段邀请的理由，因为题目可能是邀请去艺术展、宴会等等不同主题，邀请理由也要根据主题的不同而有所变化。
在阐述理由的时候建议分点说明，不要简单带过，有条有理地阐述会让阅卷老师一下就能看到要点，下面的词汇表达套进任何类型的作文都可以用。
表达首先
First of all, To begin with, To start with, At first, First and fore most
表达然后/此外
what's more, In addition, Further more
表达最后
Finally, Eventually
表达总而言之
All in all, In a word, As far as I'm concerned, In general, In total, In conclusion
范文解析
你们班同学打算周六去爬香山。请给外教Chris写一封英文信，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：
1. 时间：8am—5 pm；
2. 集合地点：校门口；
3. 交通工具：公交车；
4. 携带物品：雨具，午餐，相机。
注意：1. 词数不少于50；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
【优秀满分范文】
Dear Chris，
I’m writing to tell you that we intend to climb the Fragrant Hill this Saturday and I sincerely invite you to go with us on behalf of our class.
We are supposed to gather at the school gate and set out at 8:00 am. The bus will serve as our transportation. We will climb to the top of the hill and enjoy our picnic lunch there, so please take some food with you as lunch. At about 2:00 pm. we will go down the hill along another path and return to our school at about 5.00pm. You may equip yourself with a camera to record the beautiful scenery and an umbrella or a raincoat is also necessary in case you are caught in a rain. Please spare some time to join us.
Your participation can surely add color to our trip and we are all looking forward to your involvement.
Yours,
Joe
真题和典题精练
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2015新课标全国卷I
假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：
1 栏目介绍；
2 稿件内容；
3 稿件长度：约400词；
4 交稿日期：6月28日前。
注意：
1 词数100左右；
2 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
3 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Peter,
【参考范文1】
Dear Peter,
I’d like to ask you to write an article for our school’s English newspaper.
The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as it’s interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【参考范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you doing?
I am sending you this invitation to write an article for Foreign Cultures Section/Column of our school’s English paper. The content of this article is about the festival customs and the life of middle school students in America. I believe it will offer teenagers like my schoolmates and me a chance to enjoy and learn about your culture.
Below is some detailed information about this article. For one thing, the length of the article is about 400 words. For another, the deadline of it is before June 28.
Please let me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions, don’t hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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2017新课标全国卷II
假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1、展览时间、地点；
2、展览内容。
注意：
1、词数100左右；
2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
【参考范文】
Dear Henry,
I'm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I’m glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.
The exhibition, the theme of which is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club’s works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.
I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I’m sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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