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英文构句需要注意的一点

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英文构句需要注意的一点

在构造英文句子时,中国作者常常在写核心内容前先描述目的、地点、时间、原因等,如:

For the application in automobile interiors, this paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing.

这样不符合英文的思维习惯,英文喜欢开门见山,通常把核心内容放在最前面,如:

This paper studies the nesting optimization problem in leather manufacturing for application in automobile interiors.

又如:

Especially when numerical control (NC) techniques are widely used in industry and rapid prototype methods bring huge economical benefits, the advantage of constructing 3D model becomes extremely obvious.

以上这句话就不如写成:

The advantage of constructing a 3D model becomes extremely obvious especially when numerical control (NC) techniques are widely used in industry and rapid prototype methods bring huge economical benefits.

其他例子:

欠妥: Inside the test box, the space was filled with asbestos.

较好: The space inside the test box was filled with asbestos.

欠妥: In practice, we employed this approach to dispose of a wheelhouse subassembly of one kind of auto-body, and the results show that this method is feasible.

较好: We employed this approach to dispose of a wheelhouse subassembly of one kind of auto-body, and the results show that this method is feasible.

欠妥: To ensure sheet metal quality as well as assembly quality, CMMs are widely used in automotive industry production.

较好: CMMs are widely used in automotive industry production to ensure sheet metal quality as well as assembly quality.

欠妥:When U is taken as the control parameter, the BDs for Δ =0.0, 0.001, 0.005 are shown in Fig. 8.

较好:Figure 8 shows the BDs for Δ =0.0, 0.001, and 0.005 when U is taken as the control parameter.

欠妥:Based on the triangulation structure built from unorganized points or a CAD model, the extended STL format is described in this section.

较好:The extended STL format is described in this section based on the triangulation structure built from unorganized points or a CAD model.

来源:The Most Common Habits from more than 200 English Papers written by Graduate Chinese Engineering Students By Felicia Brittman

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